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'Ethan come on, all the good places are gonna be taken!' Mike shouted upstairs to Ethan, they were planning of going to the beach but Ethan took really long to get ready. 'Coming coming!' Ethan shouted back. He ran down the stairs. 'Don't be so fucked up… it's not like we have to stand on the beach…' 'Remember last time we thought we didn't had to stand? We actually couldn't lay down because there was not enough space.' Mike said irritated.

They stepped into the car and drove to the beach. There were a lot of people but it wasn't as bad as last time, there was enough space for them and it was really calm on the beach compared with the temperature. Kids were shouting, people were surfing, girls were tanning and family's were arguing. It was a nice day to lay down on the beach and enjoy the sun.

As soon as Ethan saw a spot he ran over and he dropped their stuff. 'This is our spot I gotta go, some chicks are just waiting for me to rub their backs with sunscreen.' Ethan ran away and Mike sighed. Sometimes Ethan could be so damn annoying, some one should learn him the lesson that chicks aren't everything… He forgot about it and grabbed a beach chair he also took a parasol and set them up. He laid down and fell asleep.

After ten minutes Ethan came back. 'Man… I'm sick of getting rejected.' Mike mumbled something like, shut up I'm trying to sleep. 'No seriously Mike, it isn't funny anymore why can't I have a nice girlfriend?' Mike got up. 'I don't know maybe you shouldn't look to much? You know, girls aren't the only thing that matters…' 'I know I know but some of them are just irresistible.' Ethan answered with a smile. For the first time Ethan looked at Mike. 'Wow, my god Mike what have you done?' You're completely red… You look like a lobster.' Mike looked and indeed, his complete back was red and burned by the sun. 'You can rub me in if you like,' Mike said laughing. I don't have big boobs but I would really appreciate it.'

Ethan laughed too and grabbed a bottle. Mike laid on his front and Ethan squirted some of the liquid in his hands. One second he hesitated but then he pushed his hands against Mike's hair and started rubbing. After a second Mike shouted. 'What the hell are you doing! You are supposed to rub put it on my back not in my hair, you idiot. Thanks a lot, now I have to wash my hair.' He stood up and was furious. He walked away but Ethan said. 'Oh come back Mike I didn't want you to be mad.'

Ethan ignored Mike but he stood still anyway, he wanted to walk away and wash his hair but instead he turned around and step by step he returned to their spot. 'Thanks man,' Ethan said with a smile. 'I didn't want you to be upset don't worry your hair is fine. 'What is happening to me! Mike shouted. I want to go wash my hair what are you doing? What is this stuff anyway?' 'Oh nothing,' Ethan answered. 'Just my new shampoo. Do you like it?'

Mike stood up again and wanted to walk away but his feet didn't let him. 'No I don't like it what is this? It paralyzes my feet or something I can't get up,' Mike was still angry with Ethan. 'HELP ME UP MAN!!' 'sssht be quite you moron.' Ethan said. Mike wanted to shout he wouldn't be quite and would shout all day if he liked to but he kept his mouth shut. He tried to open it again but he couldn't say anything. With a look filled with panic he watched Ethan coming closer to him. 'You can talk again but only when you are calm. You can't just shout, people are sleeping. Now apologies to me and we can work this out.'

'I'm sorry Ethan, I am just worried about my hair.' Mike said. He looked shocked and tried to run away but he just kept sitting there. He even apologised to Ethan, he didn't want to apologies he just wanted this to stop. 'You don't have to worry about your hair this shampoo doesn't need any water and it will work in a few minutes, now I think we have not very much to discuss right?' Mike opened his mouth and wanted to shout but it didn't work so he calmed down and said. 'Ethan, what have you done to me? Why can you give me orders?'

An evil smile appeared on Ethan's face. 'I've been working on this for months. It's a special kind of shampoo. When someone, like me, puts it on a victims head. The victim will be in my power. I can let you do anything I want you to do.' 'You can't do that it's illegal,' Mike said. 'And besides, what are you gonna do with me? Let me buy you a drink?'

'Ethan laughed. 'No no what I have in mind is much funnier for me, probably for you to, you know. We're going to have a lot of fun together.' Now Mike got really scared. 'I always thought you were straight…' 'Oh yes Mike, I am,' Ethan said. 'But you're straight too remember?' 'Yeh, I am straight, so what? Are you going to make me gay or something?'

'A lesbian couple would be really funny but no.' Ethan said. 'But wait,' I am a dude remember?' Mike said scared. 'You can see it. I am a guy so what the heck are you talking about?'

Ethan stood up from the chair. 'You're a girl.' He said. 'yeh, so?' Mike answered. 'When I kiss you, you will remember life as it should be, you are my girlfriend and you love me. You would never cheat on me and do anything I ask you to do. You are smart and sweet and carrying but nothing too much. You will love everything I do and help me whenever you can. You will laugh about my jokes and you will enjoy anything I enjoy… Last but not least. You will be okay with everything I am going to you with you and you will like it.' Ethan couldn't think of more things they would need to be together. Now the gross part of his plan had to be done. He grimaced and bend to Mike, he kissed him on his lips and after a second Mike kissed back. After three seconds Ethan jumped back and spitted on the ground. 'That was by far the worst thing I've ever done. He said.

'Didn't you like kissing me?' Mike said pouting, he grabbed his troth and made a weird face. 'My voice sounds weird, I just sound like I have a cold.' Ethan saw Mike's hair was growing and turning dirty blonde. Finally the shampoo worked. Ethan knew he had to do almost everything but the hair. The shampoo would make the hair look like the personality of the owner. He saw hair growing and growing until it was dirty blonde and it had grew to his back. It bond itself to two pigtails and black ribbons appeared. Ethan laid his hand down to Mike's troth and pushed it back. Mike's complete neck reduced in size and his Adams apple shrunk until there was nothing left.

'Do you want me to give you a massage?' Ethan asked and Mike nodded. Ethan started with Mike's shoulders. He pushed them in until they were small. Mike's whole frame shrunk when Ethan pushed him down. He looked already more like a girl. Ethan laid his hands on Mike's eyes and they started to grow. His eyelashes grew and makeup appeared on them. Mike's eyes turned icy blue, just like Mike liked it. When he pulled his hands away he rubbed her cheeks which immediately soften. Mike's whole face rounded and his face looked like a girls face.

Ethan turned Mike around and kissed him again. This time he enjoyed it a lot more and he felt her lips puff out. Ethan's thong slid inside Mike's mouth and they kissed. Ethan pulled back after a minute and took Mike's hands he held them between his and he felt them shrinking. He felt Mike's hands became slimmer and her nails and fingers grew until he had girl hands. Ethan now knew he was going good. He took Mike's arms and they started to slim down too as if they knew how Ethan liked it. Almost all of Mike's upper body was done yet but Ethan didn't want to get to the boobs. He wanted to save it for last.

Mike laid down on his front and said with a girlish voice. 'Do you want to rub me in with sunscreen? I don't want to be burned by the sun.' 'Of course honey, I will protect you're whole body against the sun.' Mike laid down and Ethan started, without any sunscreen on his hands, to rub Mike's feet. He slowly worked up and made his legs look like woman legs. They got long and smooth, smoother than anything Ethan ever felt. 'You forgot something here.' Mike said and he took Ethan's hand and laid it on his hip. Ethan smiled and started to rub both Mike's hips. It grew outwards with a little crack and he felt the bones under his hands push their way out. He rubbed until she had nice wide hips and moved down again. He moved some fat to his thighs and turned Mike around. He sat on top of him and kissed him again, slowly working against his belly. It flattened a lot and when he grabbed Mike's sides he had to giggle. 'Don't tickle me.' He said laughing. Ethan smiled, he didn't saw Mike as a boy anymore, Mike was gone. Melissa had taken his place. He kissed her again and Mike knew too he was now called Melissa.

Melissa now looked almost completely like a girl. His face looked cute and his complete frame looked girlish. He had an hourglass figure, wide hips and long feminine legs. Even his hands looked like girl hands.

Ethan wasn't done yet. Melissa would be perfect. He stood up and sat down besides his. He rolled to his front again and said. 'You still need to do my back…' Ethan pushed against his back. It arched and now his butt pushed out. He still pushed at Melissa's back until he looked hot. He rolled back and smiled at Ethan. 'Come on honey, don't you want to have fun?' He said. 'Ethan looked down to the bulge in Melissa's pants. He knew this was the last thing he needed to do and after that it would be just plain fun. He started to rub against the groin area. He saw the bulge slowly shrinking and Melissa started to moan a little. 'This feels so good Ethan. Just go on with it.' She said. Ethan grabbed Melissa's manhood and pulled it back until she had a flat surface.

Ethan smiled and said. 'Strip down.' Melissa giggled and pulled her shorts down. Ethan threw them in the bag and now Melissa was naked. He sat on her legs and started to rub between her legs. It was flat but after a while it began to pull inwards. Melissa smiled and looked in the far distance like if she was in heaven. Ethan continued to grave deeper into the slit and felt it was getting wet. He smiled at her and continued as Melissa's organs shift places. She giggled when her clitoris formed and she bit her lip to not moan out loud. For a minute Ethan was rearranging her new formed vigina until he was happy with it. He washed his hands and climbed up.

He started to rub Melissa's chest with both his hands and he saw wave after wave of pleasure going trough Melissa's body. She moved her legs with every rub he gave and slowly her breasts started to form. Ethan continued rubbing and Melissa brought her hand down to her new womanhood. She started to slowly massage it herself while Ethan was rubbing her chest. Melissa's nipples pushed their way out and the widened a little. She now had A-cup breasts. Ethan didn't like big boobs on a girl but still continued. Melissa pulled her hand back and grabbed Ethan's hands. She guided his hands and she moaned. 'Oh Ethan…' Was the only thing she could say. Ethan enjoyed it and he now had little breasts in his hands. He took his hands back and immediately Melissa took over. She kept moving them and they grew. She now had B-cup breasts and they where still growing. Ethan felt very aroused by Melissa's naked body and what she was doing to it. He grabbed her hands when she had C-cup breasts.

'Stand up.' Ethan said. Melissa blushed because she was completely naked but she stood up anyway. Ethan pulled her close to him and the kissed again. He squeezed her butt and it grew outwards. She now was completely done. Her legs grew a bit but Ethan pushed her down until she had the perfect height. He felt her breasts rubbing against his chest and they both moaned a little.

He laid her down again. 'Ethan can you give me some clothed I don't want everyone staring at me.' Melissa said.

Ethan grabbed a hand full of sand and he started to rub her breasts with it. Now Melissa moaned heavy and people around them looked up. The sand slowly turned into a white bikini top and it felt better. White ribbons appeared on her sides and Ethan rubbed het breasts for one last time.

He grabbed more sand and brought it down to her new formed womanhood. Again he started to grave but less then before. It turned slowly into a white bikini bottom but nothing to big because Ethan wanted to enjoy her nice sexy butt.

After that Melissa fell asleep and Ethan went looking for someone else who wanted to being rubbed in.
:icontg-017:
So Ethan found a way to transform his friend into a girl...
He rubbes some shampoo on his friends head and bam!! mind games can begin.

More like this? leave a comment so I know what you guys like...

Melissa = [link]

Note: in the end he still cheates on her while she can't cheat on him (he told her not to and he is in control) so yeh, messed up.
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:iconneito65:
I love how Ethan tg'ed his friend in this
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:icontg-017:
Yeh haha me too...

I was very content with the story.
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:iconneito65:
if you want/planned to do a second part with this feel free to use me (mostly kidding)
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:icontg-017:
The mostly part is funny...

I will have a look at it. Later
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:iconspawnfan:
Great story. Love your descriptiveness.. :)
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:icontg-017:
It's an honor ^^
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:iconhotwater321:
this deserves a :trophy:
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:icontg-017:
Wauw thank you very much :D
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:iconinconspicularity:
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:megustaplz:

Great story. Haven't seen one that put so much detail in to the transformation.
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:icontg-017:
Thanks :), I would love to see more of these stories too, I think there are too many artist who write just a couple of lines.
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